An investigation of Students’ Organizational Problems of Cohesion and Coherence in English Essay Writing at Higher Secondary Levels of Sindh, Pakistan

  • Abdul Razzaque Lanjwani Jat Sukkur IBA University/Community College Dadu, Sindh, Pakistan
  • Ayaz Ali Jarah Shaheed Benazir Bhutto University Shaheed Benazir Abad, Sindh, Paksitan
  • Siraj Ahmed Channa Shaheed Benazir Bhutto University Shaheed Benazir Abad, Sindh, Paksitan
  • Javeed Iqbal Mirani Shaheed Benazir Bhutto University Shaheed Benazir Abad, Sindh, Paksitan


Academic writing is a form of testing; moreover, most of the writing tasks and assignments across the country school curriculum, the designers of the writing assignments is also the audience and the evaluator, and that designer-evaluator expects student-writers to demonstrate particular knowledge and skills. Hence, like all the tests designers, developers of writing assignments should carefully consider different purposes, the parameters and constraints, and the evaluation criteria for each writing assignment. In this paper, we discussed organizational problems in essay writing such as, topic sentences, thesis statements, cohesion, coherence, completeness and unity. We applied a qualitative method for data collection.  For this, we selected one hundred students to write essays on different topics. Among them, we chose twenty written essays for data analysis. The findings suggested that students have organizational problems in English essay writing. It was found in their writings that most of the students have difficulties in organization their essay. Students get difficulties in introduction, topic sentence, thesis statement, transition of ideas, and use of cohesive devices, sequence and writing conclusion. There are certain reasons. Firstly, the effects of background information of particular topic and general information. Secondly, the low language proficiency, the students get it difficulty to create coherence and unity in their writings. It is because they give more importance to language and meanings.


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How to Cite
LANJWANI JAT, Abdul Razzaque et al. An investigation of Students’ Organizational Problems of Cohesion and Coherence in English Essay Writing at Higher Secondary Levels of Sindh, Pakistan. International Journal of Social Sciences, Humanities and Education, [S.l.], v. 3, n. 4, p. 244-252, june 2020. ISSN 2521-0041. Available at: <>. Date accessed: 03 july 2020.